We went to Erith to shoot the new filler shots of the video and when we got back I went to edit it with nathan and Alex. Nathan started to edit how it will start and I personally did not like what he planned. He wanted to open with Kyle putting the poster up, then going to Jack, then cut to the sea and then cut to me and then cut to him throwing the leaflet. I did not like this and I suggested that we first show Kyle attempting to put the poster up and then we will have him walking to Jack, then have him walking to me, then cut to Jack where he says no and walks off, then cut to me where I say no and Kyle walks off. This looked a lot more effective and the group all agreed.
Next Alex and I edited the climax where Kyle was at the pier and he threw the paper in the water. I decided to use the pan shot going round Kyle and then we will have him throw the leaflet into the sea.

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